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高三英语作文:校门口交通拥挤的原因和建议

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  在某学校门口及附近,上学和放学时候交通常常拥挤甚至堵塞,给师生、家长及市民带来许多不便,很多人为些担忧.作为一名该校学生,请你以李华的名义给某英语报社写信反映该情况,内容包括:

  1.交通拥挤的原因;
  2.提出至少两条建议.
  注意:
  1.词数100左右;
  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
  3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.

  Dear Editor,
  I'm Li Hua,s student of Senior 3.I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate. With so many parents coming to pick up their children,traffic jams are frequent near the school gate,causing much inconvenience to us students as well as our teachers and passers﹣by.【高分句型一】Many people have been worrying about the hidden traffic problems.(交通拥挤的原因) So I strongly recommend some effective and urgent measures be taken.【高分句型二】First,we should encourage students to ride their bicycles or walk to school by themselves instead of taking cars,which will not only help reduce the jam but benefit students'health as well.It is also a good idea to allow junior students to leave school 10 minutes earlier than others.Besides,cars should not be allowed to park near the school gate.(提出建议)
  I do hope my suggestions can be considered and the problem can be solved soon.(提出希望) 
  Yours,
  Li Hua

  【考点】R1:提纲类.
  【分析】这是一篇反映学校门口及附近,上学和放学时候交通常常拥挤问题的信.根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态.内容包括:一点明写信目的;二交通拥挤的原因;三提出建议;四提出希望.

  高分句型:
  1.With so many parents coming to pick up their children,traffic jams are frequent near the school gate,causing much inconvenience to us students as well as our teachers and passers﹣by.句子里With so many parents coming to pick up their children是with的复合结构,做原因状语;causing much inconvenience to us students as well as our teachers and passers﹣by.是非谓语动词做结果状语;as well as 表示"也包括".
  因为那么多家长来接孩子,学校附近经常有交通阻塞,给学生,老师和路人造成许多不便.
  2.So I strongly recommend some effective and urgent measures be taken.句子里recommend的宾语从句some effective and urgent measures be taken的谓语动词用should+动词原形,should可以省略.
  因此我强烈建议应该采取一些有效和紧急的措施.

  【解答】Dear Editor,
  I'm Zhang Xiaoming,a student from Grade 3.I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate.(点明写信目的)
  With so many parents coming to pick up their children,traffic jams are frequent near the school gate,causing much inconvenience to us students as well as our teachers and passers﹣by.【高分句型一】Many people have been worrying about the hidden traffic problems.(交通拥挤的原因) So I strongly recommend some effective and urgent measures be taken.【高分句型二】First,we should encourage students to ride their bicycles or walk to school by themselves instead of taking cars,which will not only help reduce the jam but benefit students'health as well.It is also a good idea to allow junior students to leave school 10 minutes earlier than others.Besides,cars should not be allowed to park near the school gate.(提出建议)
  I do hope my suggestions can be considered and the problem can be solved soon.(提出希望)
  Yours,
  Zhang Xiaoming
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